I am here to give feedback on Mo's Blog which is about his creation of his advert. At the start, his initial ideas and research were very clear since he labelled out each individual detail his researched adverts had, such as the small details in the Ipod Advertisement apple had and the detailed explanation on the simplicity the Marmite ad presented.
Moving onto the initial sketch of his advert creation, the ideas and simplicity of the advertisements he referenced his thoughts from were present in the sketch he had created, however, the main ideas and capabilities the two adverts he used for his research were not mainly present in his sketch since the two advertisements were selling products and he created a sketch for a campaign. It would've been better to find and utilize drug campaign adverts so it harmonizes with the ideas he wanted to pursue.
As we move unto his latest two blogs, from the start to the end, there was always commentary pertaining to the processes and tools he used in the creation process, such as his use of Pixlr and websites that provide stock images.
The advertisement's outcome itself was accomplished, since it tells a message of what drug use can lead to namely all of your close family and friends 'fading away'. There could be improvements to the color of either the background or the color of the hands he had used since it is sort of difficult to see the hands as it mixes with the color of the background. The advert creation was well executed though there could be minor improvements. Great Job Mo!
Good that you posted this Alan. Some valid comments. However, what could your blog buddy do differently or improve on next time?
ReplyDeleteI have given some constructive criticism as shown above, however, I will add more depth to my criticism in the future to further help support my blog buddy. Thank you for commenting!
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